I've been working on a new track for the last little bit and I'm needing something spruce this up a bit and I can't put my finger on it, when I try different things I'm getting backfire. Anyone care to listen and possibly give any advice? If not its cool, maybe just listen.

www.myspace.com/stitchproject

The track I'm asking about is the bottom one, Motivation. The ending still needs a better wrap, which I'm currently working on. I trust you guys on here =)

Thanks.

The beat at the end (the last 10 seconds or so) is pretty catchy. It's an odd song to say the least, I can tell you have a lot of influence from music in games.
Stay with it, it wasn't bad

The end feels like a chorus. I can see it going on for another few minutes with changing themes and more voice overs. But liking it so far!