I don't know if this has been done before or not, but whatever. Post lyrics you've written on this thread. Here's a song I wrote a while back inspired by Metallica's Dyers Eve.
VERSE
My Father, you think less of me and beat my
Mother, no respect for me you treat my
Sister as if she's a living grave, my
Brother, you die as you live inside my
Lover, you rip me to shreds inside my
Cover, you open up to reveal my
Center. You've shaken me to the core
I know you're coming back for more.
CHORUS
Awaken the sleeping giant
Parade in the fire fight and
Destroy all the innocence
That never rightfully was yours
VERSE
My Father, you tear up the pieces of my
Mother, you blister the wounds from my dear
Brother, you rape the damnation in my
Sister, you hold the salvation to my
Lover, who holds the redemption in my
Cover, which rips open wounds in my own
Center. I've been shaken to the core
It always wants to eat some more.
CHORUS
BRIDGE
Blindly follow
Die tomorrow
Life for you and death for me
Bring corruption
Hell destruction
Curse the day that brought forth me
VERSE
My Father, you bring out the worst in my sick
Mother, who tortures the cruel, tormented
Brother, of mine who cries out to my poor
Sister, who's mad with the knowledge of my
Lover, who lives to despise me and my
Cover, which fails and shows the world my own
Center, which now is an empty hole
There's no more room for any more.
CHORUS
Not my best piece of work, but interesting. Feedback would be appreciated.
VERSE
My Father, you think less of me and beat my
Mother, no respect for me you treat my
Sister as if she's a living grave, my
Brother, you die as you live inside my
Lover, you rip me to shreds inside my
Cover, you open up to reveal my
Center. You've shaken me to the core
I know you're coming back for more.
CHORUS
Awaken the sleeping giant
Parade in the fire fight and
Destroy all the innocence
That never rightfully was yours
VERSE
My Father, you tear up the pieces of my
Mother, you blister the wounds from my dear
Brother, you rape the damnation in my
Sister, you hold the salvation to my
Lover, who holds the redemption in my
Cover, which rips open wounds in my own
Center. I've been shaken to the core
It always wants to eat some more.
CHORUS
BRIDGE
Blindly follow
Die tomorrow
Life for you and death for me
Bring corruption
Hell destruction
Curse the day that brought forth me
VERSE
My Father, you bring out the worst in my sick
Mother, who tortures the cruel, tormented
Brother, of mine who cries out to my poor
Sister, who's mad with the knowledge of my
Lover, who lives to despise me and my
Cover, which fails and shows the world my own
Center, which now is an empty hole
There's no more room for any more.
CHORUS
Not my best piece of work, but interesting. Feedback would be appreciated.
