I've just completed a my first track with my new axe and could use whatever feedback you have. I'll be adding slowly as I accumulate material.
www.dbartart.com/Document%201.mp3

That snare needs some life. It's a bit abrasive. Maybe less highs and some reverb. The whole thing also sounds a bit overdriven in the heavy parts. What are you using for drums?

Music is cool though.

I'm using Reason Drum Kits 2 - I can definitely roll off some highs on the snare and give it a bit of reverb. A new version has been uploaded.

Yep there's pretty loud crackling in heavy bit. Which is a shame, because guitars sound really cool. Otherwise nice sludgey stuff :>

I've uploaded a new version tonight - I reworked my distortion patch and tweaked my mastering for the dirty guitar rhythm tracks as well. Let me know if the cracking has improved.