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Persephone

PostPosted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 3:04 pm
by Wiseblud
Another song for you all to not let me know whether you liked or not :D . And no it sounds nothing like Mesuggah. Please leave feedback if you would be so kind.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/hgnt4cy4h2q/02

Re: Persephone

PostPosted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 5:29 pm
by Wiseblud
Weak Bro, weak and here I got all excited that someone listened to my shit and it was a damn spammer.

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Re: Persephone

PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 9:48 am
by BrunoN
Well, don't be angry, at least you now know where to buy casual wedding dress.

As for song, looks like you like Metallica, don't you. I like the vocals (even if effected as hell). Not sure if I like it being drum-less.

Re: Persephone

PostPosted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 9:13 pm
by Wiseblud
BrunoN wrote:Well, don't be angry, at least you now know where to buy casual wedding dress.

As for song, looks like you like Metallica, don't you. I like the vocals (even if effected as hell). Not sure if I like it being drum-less.


I think you are right, I do like Metallica. I learned how to play with the Justice tab book, thus most of the early music I wrote sounds Metallica-ish. Yes I use autotune.....but hell, autotune harmony how cool is that? It is drumless because if I were to put drums to it, it is less like the devil singing highly compressed vocals to a woman he kidnapped. :D I know what you mean though. Thanks for listening and the comment.

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Re: Persephone

PostPosted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 3:45 pm
by Migstopheles
Listening now...

That vocal effect reminds me of Lordi for some reason :oops:

Defintely hearing very strong Metallica influences. Not necessarily a bad thing!

Waaaaay too much gain on that guitar in the background at the 2:40 mark. I was expecting everything to go heavy then to be honest.


Overally, it's a decent song, but I found it just a touch repetitive. Not sure what it was, everything just seemed lacking in dynamics slightly. Not bad at all though :)

Re: Persephone

PostPosted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 5:31 pm
by Wiseblud
The final part repeats three times, originally I wanted to fade out with it but couldn't bring myself to do it. As far as dynamics go, I am an audiologist by trade, so I guess I feel I have to make everything as audible as possible, thus the the dynamics suffer. You're not the first person to speak of the lack of dynamics in the mix. :D

Thanks for listening and commenting.