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Song lyrics. Give your thoughts!

PostPosted: Thu May 07, 2009 5:31 pm
by Falling Upward9
Ehh, I am working on lyrics for a song. I wanted to get some feedback.
Nothing is set in stone! Give your ideas.

Color Scheme

I don’t understand this mindset anymore. Stricken with poverty, how much can I endure? Casting shadows where hope used to lay. This art of beggary, I take my time to pray.

We are everything, on continuous mind. This world is not my soul; this sphere is but a shrine.

Endless circles move miles upon end. Concepts and numbers our brains create a trend. I see the colors form and move within a list. She says there’s nothing here this dream does not exist.

Spoon-fed everything a life I have to live. The gate is closing here; you take what you can give. I think that no one knows because they do not try. I want the glass to fill, at least before I die.

We are everything, one continuous mind. I tried to move myself but was stuck in time.

False sense of power, you think you need a gun? There is a meaning here, you’re not the only one. Try to believe only what you can see. Sign of a bigot, you mean nothing to me.

Defining moments obscured by our past. Taking every breath, you know that it’s your last. Now I see the color scheme, it’s here and then it leaves. We can save our selves but no one else believes.

Still working on it...