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I got some new toys
And this is the first song I've completed using them so far.
Please chek it out.
http://www.myspace.com/ravenzwire
new one should be track one "She Wonders"

This sounds pretty cool! I like the songwriting, you really have a taste for good songs. Just a few comments, though.
The guitarsound is a bit messy, I don't know if you chose for this sound and the amount of gain, because it is industrial music, but it lacks definition.
I'd also chose to mix the vocals a little bit to the front; they are quite soft compared to the guitars.
The rest of it, is nice man. Keep on rocking