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So I left my band and made this
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Sat Jan 15, 2005 2:18 pmby hog
Ok, I was in 2 bands and left them. Decided to make my own acoustic music. Firstly I cant sing and I did sing on this demo. Please dont comment on the shit vocals, just the tune.
thanks!
http://www.picturethis-home.biz/assets/ ... rack_4.wma
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Sat Jan 15, 2005 5:24 pmby mo
nice dude
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Sat Jan 15, 2005 5:46 pmby mo
Yeah i listened again, I dig it.
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Sat Jan 15, 2005 6:32 pmby simen_88
I like it. And the vocals were reasonably good for the most part, but it seemed to go too high a few times.
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Sat Jan 15, 2005 6:34 pmby King Ghidorah
I'm a songwriter too man so I'm going to try to be constructive, without being a d**k.
I really like the verses and i think your voice is quite cool actually, but i just don't think the chorus works, its a totally diffrent style than the verse and it doesn't work for me, but its your song man so whatever you think is best. The ending section of the song is very cool too, I'd like to hear some more of your stuff.
Cheers.
David.
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Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:55 amby fragility
I really like. Been writing a lot of acoustic parts lately myself - and you've got some nice stuff there....plus, it sounds pretty original, which is always important to me
very good job - my only real criticisms are regarding production, on the bit when the solo comes in...things seem to meld together a little....I'd also probably turn that down a little on the mix, and adjust the eq on it etc....but then I'm not sure this was about getting a perfect recording, Post some more when you've got it!
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Mon Jan 17, 2005 11:53 amby Blazingmonga
This is really cool Hog, I like it.
Your voice is actually much better than you give yourself credit for. It doesnt sound so good in the high parts, but I think it has a lot of character for most of the song.
Good stuff!
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Mon Jan 17, 2005 12:02 pmby Bloody_Rust
Yup - Like Blazingmonga said, your voice is better than you give yourself credit for!
Pretty good song you've got there. Much better than I could do! Also, it sounds pretty decent on my laptop (which has rubbish sound and usually makes everything sound repulsive).
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Tue Jan 18, 2005 6:13 pmby hog
Wow, thanks guys!
Well, I am working on new stuff and will let you hear it in due course. Thanks for the constructive comments, its much appreciated
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Thu Jan 20, 2005 4:40 amby Velvet
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Thu Jan 20, 2005 6:22 amby ibanez
I canny hear yer accent!
Aye defo a good track..
good work.
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Fri Mar 11, 2005 5:38 amby jon
great demo, im well impressed
let us know when theres more til hear
