Dunkelheit wrote:me likey
Thanks!

Biert: Ahh, thanks man. It won't let me view the page as I don't have an account on Demonoid, but I'll sign up shortly.
Monga: Awesome review! I appreciate it. You're right on most points as well; the songs were written with a more traditional structure in mind, it was indeed intended to be much more rough and noisy-- not overly harsh or lo-fi, but very junkyard-ish, if that makes sense. If I were felt myself to be pretentious enough, maybe I would come up with a clever sub-genre like 'Scrap Metal.'

The songs also seem more personal, yes, though that's probably (partly) because this album is mostly lyrical-- and I usually try not to be too obscure with my writing. Actually, borerer was almost as personal at its core (perhaps equally so), but since it was so abstract and esoteric, it didn't come across very well in that regard-- not that it should have, though.
As for my voice, I definitely agree I'm far from the best vocalist right now, but I feel I can us it acceptably enough for this sort of thing. By the time the next lyrical Swimfail release comes around, though, I probably will have taken lessons and developed my voice much more. I like to be able to show people my progression and voice my thoughts with the means available to me at the moment, instead of waiting until I've perfectly mastered everything and risk not feeling any of what made me do it in the first place. It's very cool to look back and see where I've come from.
Thanks again for the review, it was great reading it as usual!
~Josiah