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another song! omg

PostPosted: Sat Apr 26, 2008 3:15 pm
by Dr.Mosh
Here, the next song I am working on. very slightly different direction to the last but still grindcore.
http://moshman.shackspace.com/canonise.mp3

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 4:47 am
by nrich
needs an assload of more compression, drums need some force behind them, and that guitar tone induitably needs a helluva lot more crunch

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 5:55 am
by Dr.Mosh
I agree about the drums needing force and some compression, but the guitars need less gain imo.

also: cut me some slack, it's just me in my room doing it all by myself :)

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 8:57 am
by sj_2150
nrich wrote:needs an assload of more compression, drums need some force behind them, and that guitar tone induitably needs a helluva lot more crunch

HELL NO! sounds real! theres far too much clicky sound in death metal. its got a dynamic sound to it! Dr. Mosh, great job. dont change it coz i said so :D

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 1:43 pm
by Josiah Tobin
I agree with SJ, keep the drums the way they are. The guitars could be a fair bit quieter though, to let the drums come through a bit more instead of just compressing them. Also maybe cut off some of the guitar's low end, let the bass handle that (or give the guitars a little boost around 3-4 kHz and take off some of the gain). Lead guitar during the sweep parts sounds great.

Cool tune overall, nice job. :D

~Josiah

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 8:37 pm
by nrich
sj_2150 wrote:
nrich wrote:needs an assload of more compression, drums need some force behind them, and that guitar tone induitably needs a helluva lot more crunch

HELL NO! sounds real! theres far too much clicky sound in death metal. its got a dynamic sound to it! Dr. Mosh, great job. dont change it coz i said so :D

haha and how long have YOU been producing music? ;)

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:09 pm
by Josiah Tobin
Look out, we've got a condescending producer in the house... ;)

~Josiah

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 12:10 am
by Dr.Mosh
nrich wrote:
sj_2150 wrote:
nrich wrote:needs an assload of more compression, drums need some force behind them, and that guitar tone induitably needs a helluva lot more crunch

HELL NO! sounds real! theres far too much clicky sound in death metal. its got a dynamic sound to it! Dr. Mosh, great job. dont change it coz i said so :D

haha and how long have YOU been producing music? ;)


Just because you produce doesn't mean your opinion on how things should sound is right. No one is doubting you know more about production and what sounds good from a certain standpoint (commercial release or nu-metal or whatnot) but that might not be what other people think sounds good.
What music HAVE you produced if I may ask? Judging by the fact that you are 18, it can't be all that much.

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 12:13 am
by Dr.Mosh
Josiah Tobin wrote:I agree with SJ, keep the drums the way they are. The guitars could be a fair bit quieter though, to let the drums come through a bit more instead of just compressing them. Also maybe cut off some of the guitar's low end, let the bass handle that (or give the guitars a little boost around 3-4 kHz and take off some of the gain). Lead guitar during the sweep parts sounds great.

Cool tune overall, nice job. :D

~Josiah


Thanks! I actually turned the drums down a bit from another mix I had :) And the guitar doesn't have all that much low end, it is mostly handled by the bass but I will go back and take another look at it. Thanks for the tip.
Unfortunately the 3.4khz region is very very fizzy because I recorded through a Palmer amp sim, so dunno about boosting that. The Palmer lends itself much better to lead guitar than rhythm it seems. Oh well, but I might be getting a sweet iso cab soon.

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 2:52 am
by sj_2150
Dr.Mosh wrote:
nrich wrote:
sj_2150 wrote:
nrich wrote:needs an assload of more compression, drums need some force behind them, and that guitar tone induitably needs a helluva lot more crunch

HELL NO! sounds real! theres far too much clicky sound in death metal. its got a dynamic sound to it! Dr. Mosh, great job. dont change it coz i said so :D

haha and how long have YOU been producing music? ;)


Just because you produce doesn't mean your opinion on how things should sound it right. No one is doubting you know more about production and what sounds good from a certain standpoint (commercial release or nu-metal or whatnot) but that might not be what other people think sounds good.
What music HAVE you produced if I may ask? Judging by the fact that you are 18, it can't be all that much.

exactly. go suck timbalands balls nrich :lol:

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 11:57 pm
by BrunoN
Yeah, guitars kinda overpower drums, but it may be shit soundcard I have in my workputer (rather useless even with decent headphones), I'll check it at home.

I like that loud, clicky drums, by the way :)

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 12:52 am
by sj_2150
i call those drums tickpop. coz they usually go tick-pop-tick-pop-tick-pop-tick-pop! < kick-snare-kick-snare etc :P

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 1:22 am
by Josiah Tobin
Yeah, whatever happened to the good old thump-crack-thump-crack etc? :P

~Josiah

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 2:28 am
by Dr.Mosh
BrunoN wrote:Yeah, guitars kinda overpower drums, but it may be shit soundcard I have in my workputer (rather useless even with decent headphones), I'll check it at home.

I like that loud, clicky drums, by the way :)


Yeah, sounds off on my speakers at work too. But sounds fine on my monitor speakers at home. I will have to do another mix

Re: another song! omg

PostPosted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 1:42 pm
by BrunoN
Yeah, sound better @ home, though guitars still appear bit too loud.

I like the drums, by the way (now when I can hear them properly). They have this classic death metal vibe.